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Mother Fate...(w/pic)
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Mother Fate...(w/pic) |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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 I hold you gently- (in hands of time) Scarlet wishing, stumbled design... Softened shell- a love shower~ Caressing notes, of higher power... Memory, or yet- *a dream* Fashioned inside, the heart of me... Ginger path- *of destiny* Oh fortunate~ finding you for me... In all my wishing- (On moon and star) I second blink, and there you are... Standing tall- in time and measure, Extended hand~ I take your pleasure... I give it back- (tenfold I hope) Steering toward- *kaleidoscope*... Completing me- as I to you, Souls a-shaking- hearts construed... Holding out- for Mother Fate, Seems so worth it, however late… I cherish you- (my sacred soul) Forever reigns- *completion whole…* Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... [This message has been edited by devina (06-21-2002 09:46 PM).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Lovely work! "In all my wishing- (On moon and star) I second blink, and there you are... Standing tall- in time and measure, Extended hand~ I take your pleasure... I give it back- (tenfold I hope) Steering toward- *kaleidoscope*... Completing me- as I to you, Souls a-shaking- hearts construed... Holding out- for Mother Fate, Seems so worth it, however late… Beautiful positive thoughts! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Devina, you write of love very well...And this poem flows with love from an ever flowing stream of romantic thoughts... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Tanya, this is sooooooo beautifully romantic, sweet friend, may completeness always plate your heart and may your eyes always see love in kaleidoscope fancy, sweet friend, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tanya, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Wow! You dipped into the Serenity book of coolness to write this one! Yum! She said burn ... together. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
ethome- Thank you dearest...this was for my positively beautiful man...  G*Magnus- I have quite the inspiration over here...ty for the sweet words... MA- have no fear...bonds run deep as rivers run far!!! Mike- ty for the yummy...peaceful book of love has definantly *smacked* me in the face today!!!  Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I hold you gently- (in hands of time) Scarlet wishing, stumbled design... Softened shell- a love shower~ Caressing notes, of higher power... Memory, or yet- *a dream* Fashioned inside, the heart of me... Ginger path- *of destiny* Oh fortunate~ finding you for me... ============================ this is so cool... I love the phrasing and *emphasis* you put on certain words... and the cadence on this is delightful...read aloud like a melody... wonderful to see you so happy and well inspired girlie-girl "It's not about having what you want ... |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
It's wonderful seeing someone so much in love....and expressing it so well  |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Devina, goodness, this is beyond words! Excellent! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*shhhhhh* I'm waiting for the feather to drop. . . loved it hon. . . amazing. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Janet- sooo good to hear from you old friend...and thank you for noticing my *emphasis* Michael- well you've seen me on a rampage dear man...thought it was time I settled down and made happy-like!! Saunni- thank you sweetie... John- feather huh? Was is all that? I thank you my dearest friend, as you've witnessed every bump in my rocky road before I found happiness... Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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BrandeeM Junior Member
since 2002-05-01
Posts 45 |
oohhh...had to bump this back up with the new picture and all... can't believe I almost missed this!!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
devina Happiness shines from your words and the heart kissed photo. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Holding out- for Mother Fate, Seems so worth it, however late… I cherish you- (my sacred soul) Forever reigns- *completion whole…* ----------------------- BEAUTIFUL!! And, loved the pic as well! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DevinaChild~ You know it makes my heart smile to see you so happy~ Wonderful pic of you two~ Beautiful flowing thoughts from your heart~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
thanks for a beautiful poem of love and for the wondeful picture that goes so well with the lovely words - Paul |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely presentation...James |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
I just am speechless...  |
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