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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2002-06-19 04:42 AM


I heard it more than once or twice--
I never did believe...
I felt the wet lip of entice--
I never did believe...


I felt the suck upon my neck--
wishing for a bite of blood--
I felt the bite of pure regret--
I felt the innocence of flood...


I felt the urge to build an ark--
I felt resonance within--
I saw the imagery of spark--
I felt fire in my sin.


*     *     *



I am flooded by regret--
I am constant wave of live...
I am haunted by beget--
I am constancy of give...


I am urge in spark of rock.
I begin the birth of fire.
I am constancy--tick-tock--
Eternity of life...expired..


[This message has been edited by serenity (06-19-2002 05:08 AM).]

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ethome
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1 posted 2002-06-19 05:01 AM


This seems to be a down poet from my southern belle.
I do like the idea of building an ark to keep from drowning in the flood of regret.
Regrets...I have a few....Oh, I better not get started.

I'll haunt you with the constancy of forget....Then you'll be a rocket of flaming future thoughts!

Bye for now Celeste!

serenity blaze
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2 posted 2002-06-19 05:10 AM


hey boo! I would love an egg white omelet...sigh...hugs?
ethome
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3 posted 2002-06-19 05:14 AM


Oh if I was only 3045 miles and several inches closer.
I could make you a delightful breakfast in bed!

[This message has been edited by ethome (06-19-2002 05:16 AM).]

serenity blaze
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4 posted 2002-06-19 05:16 AM


damn...I'm HUNGRY TOO....
ethome
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5 posted 2002-06-19 05:18 AM


Aw c'mon send the Lear Jet for me!!
serenity blaze
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6 posted 2002-06-19 05:21 AM


SSSSH...OKAY...I think "Mick" is sleeping...I suppose, I could just write a check for the gas! ROFLMAO BUT? KEITH RICHARDS IS GONNA BE PISSED...
ethome
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7 posted 2002-06-19 05:37 AM


Yeah but you're really in luck!
Let him be pissed...cause he's one of the few I can say I look better than!
Tra la la de boom de ay
I look better than Keith Richards today!

Hard to believe he's the youngest of all the Stones isn't it?
I mean that man's had all his tires kicked and several of them punctured!

serenity blaze
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8 posted 2002-06-19 05:39 AM


yes...but still....hmmm...ya almost WANNA KNOW what's beneath dem wrinkles...sigh?

me one sick puppy...

ethome
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9 posted 2002-06-19 05:46 AM


Well you see, it's like this.....I stay good and fat so everything is on the outside. What you see is what you get!
But behind those wrinkles there might be a million stories that would keep ya spellbound forever....So you got a good point there.....However, I can't seem to muster too much curiosity over what's behind those wrinkles....I can see why you might.

Please don't get lost in one of those folds.....I wouldn't have anyone to play with!

Well
Me gotta go workum
You writeum
Me readum
Laterum.

You good south girl need in tee pee...........How!

serenity blaze
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10 posted 2002-06-19 05:48 AM


me want wam pawm
ethome
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11 posted 2002-06-19 05:50 AM


You getum anything you wantum!
serenity blaze
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12 posted 2002-06-19 05:54 AM



Goodknight
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13 posted 2002-06-19 10:10 AM


not wanting to break in as an interloper but I really loved the poem and enjoyed all the images you wove - Paul
Janet Marie
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14 posted 2002-06-19 10:27 AM


I felt the urge to build an ark--
I felt resonance within--
I saw the imagery of spark--
I felt fire in my sin.

I am flooded by regret--
I am constant wave of live...
I am haunted by beget--
I am constancy of give...
===============================

"Constant Craving has always been ....
has always been."


ya had me from the title....
*sigh*
LYMT
mothyme

"It's not about having what you want ...
It's wanting what you've got"


S.C.

serenity blaze
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15 posted 2002-06-19 10:32 AM


hey---grin it's okay....and e and I? just seem to be doing this "thing" lately...lol.. thank you, my "good" friend...and Jan? If I don't get some sleep soon? I'm gonna miss that date for chinese!!!

(I HATE WHEN THAT HAPPENS)

thanks you guys

bsquirrel
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16 posted 2002-06-20 12:46 PM


Ooo! Nice pre-marriage angst. Celebratin' the past before it's gone away, an' stuff.

Always love yr stuff.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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