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A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2002-06-19 12:58 PM

Woe is me, for my eyes cannot see,
my heart cannot feel, my hands cannot
touch,
For winter has came, it has frozen
my heart,pain and betrayal have
done their part,
Sun does not shine, days are cold,
my heart is withered and old,
Silence evolves where heartfelt words
were spoken, lips are now icycle tokens,
Flowers of love broken and torn,
Love was a lie, before it was born,
Into this view of broken hearts lament,
You will see a crack within the hearts cement,
Must it die, be put to death,
Heart of mine, love of mine, I now lay you to rest...

Magicmystery
Senior Member

since 2002-02-13

Posts 821
Windsor, Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2002-06-19 01:32 AM

wow... what a funeral you are having here... I loved your images.... hope you warm up soon...remember.... the sun also rises.

Love, Light and Peace,

Sherry

Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2002-06-19 04:35 AM

Well well well....A Romantic Heart....where have you been.
This is so sad......hope it's just a creative write

                          "Flowers of love broken and torn,
                          Love was a lie, before it was born,
                        Into this view of broken hearts lament,
                     You will see a crack within the hearts cement,
                            Must it die, be put to death,
                    Heart of mine, love of mine, I now lay you to rest.."

Nice writing!
Don't stay away so long.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2002-06-19 06:49 AM

I was wondering where you were...hope you are romantically back...James

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2002-06-19 07:37 AM

Oh, so much sadness here. If ony love would not do this to us.
Sandra

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2002-06-19 08:52 AM

A Romantic Heart
A lovely sad lament.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

6 posted 2002-06-19 09:07 AM

This is such a sad poem. I hope your broken heart mends soon.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2002-06-19 04:33 PM

an elegy well spoken. . .

welcome back. . . you have been missed. . .

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Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

8 posted 2002-06-19 04:35 PM

a very well done poem that makes the readers heartache too - thanks for the look into your soul - Paul

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

9 posted 2002-06-19 08:23 PM

It is great to be back among friends, I have been going through alot, and the poem does reflect my true state of being...broken!

I have missed all of you so much! I enjoyed reading and catching up, I see alot of new
friends and poets here! glad to have all of you aboard!
I need some hugs!!!!

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (06-19-2002 08:25 PM).]

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