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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Hidden hidden within a thousand words is exactly how I feel simplicity in such complication makes everything so real I have found the smoothest skin underneath all the scars the cuts that I have felt are not just mine they are ours I’ve walked so many miles marching in the same place they have brought me here and them I still embrace this now is the season of happiness of the fall of my life just to stand here I would again feel the slice of knife "The heart is the toughest part of the body, tenderness is in the hands." Carolyn Forche' [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (06-18-2002 10:32 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is some strong stuff here. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  WOW!!! Oh my gosh, one word came to my mind reading this "contradiction". I felt this poe is sooooo emotionally effective and winds and curves in serpentine between two sides in contradictive thoughts, sweet friend, it indeed can always have the secret meaning hidden in the heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Daniel van Vliet Member
since 2001-08-31
Posts 80 |
.... this was thought provoking, well done, thank-you. |
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LilTai Member
since 2002-06-08
Posts 189United States |
Oh wow...this really hit something inside of me, it brought me to tears...I love this peice...  *hugs thru the tears* Tai |
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