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LilTai
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since 2002-06-08
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0 posted 2002-06-10 05:58 PM


(Last one tonight, I promise...again, I'm truly sorry for taking up so much space...I guess when a thought crosses my mind it demands to be written..sorry again..)

That Place

Take me to that place
that one we both can find
the place that everyone has
deep inside their mind

In this place
with pillows of soft gold
We can lay together
And there we'll grow old

The place where time melts out of place
and the race to the finish
No longer has a pace

Under the moonlight
I'll meet you there
Under the moonlight
For the love that we share

The moon will die
and the sun will live
and its glorious light
to only us it'll give

And that morning we'll wake
And with you by my side
I'll forever be in peace
For you my heart's open wide

Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2002-06-11 10:03 PM



I think I'm liking this write...

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2002-06-11 10:08 PM


Awesome as usual.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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