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Oh So Sorry
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Oh So Sorry |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Oh So Sorry I hurt her so now she wants to hurt me. I suppose that happens to all of us eventually. Its sort of a sub conscious need for revenge. A means of survival that takes over from within. Similar to our overpowering will to survive. A place where pride and self defense collide. I hurt her so now she wants to hurt me. I'm sorry oh so sorry that I hurt her. I wonder if she will be sorry after she hurts me. JamesLee June18 2002 |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello James We all have our regrets and I have no doubt she will be sorry. No one wins in these situations and I guess there comes a time where it is just better to move on away from all the hurt and anger. Take care....Sue Suetang |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
powerful window on the complexities of relationships - wonder if we pondered these things before if we would hurt less...Thanks Paul |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I hope things work out, James. Sandra |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
So many times words are exchanged in anger and the hurt makes you lash out. Very well written James. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big huggsssssss) Oh James, this is so very sad, sweet friend, I hope everything is alright and I hope soon she can fel for you once more and calm your beating heart! (sigh) I believe we all have times like these but in the end everything will work out, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I know hoe this feels. Liam and me have gone through this a lot. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
JM...yes, I too hope that she remembers and that all will be well. Written well. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I enjoyed this- the short lines and parallels. Well written poem. It makes a person think, even if it's sometimes too late. Nan |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write my friend. Hope all is well with you and Jin! ~hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
It's very likely that she shall be... It's just the nature of things. good read. ~R.T. "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Suetang, Goodnight, Sandra, Ariana, Noah, loner, Magnus, Nan and Enchantress for the nice responses. Yes Enchantress me and Jin are fine... I was thinking of a situation from way in my past... And I did hurt hurt and she did hurt me and I was wondering if she ever regretted it...I have thought of our relationship many times in regret...James |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
You say it as if it's an inevitable thing James... Take care~ and watch your back sweetie!!  lolOpen arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes devina probably as certain as getting hit by a car if one was to walk across a Freeway during rush hour...James |
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