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jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

0 posted 2002-06-17 04:59 PM

Yesterday was served tough
no salt, no side dishes, no
garnish.

The menu for today, I regret to report is
leftovers.

A two handed protest says
no more for me I have had more than
enough.

[This message has been edited by jellybeans (06-19-2002 02:42 PM).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-06-17 05:14 PM

Gads, JB, no salt at all?

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2002-06-17 05:16 PM

Like this...James

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-06-17 05:39 PM

Awesome!!

Cold hands means a warm heart

LilTai
Member

since 2002-06-08

Posts 189
United States

4 posted 2002-06-17 05:42 PM

Oh I really like this...so creative! Sorry about your rough days...they'll get better. I really enjoyed this poem of yours though

*hugs*

Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2002-06-17 05:55 PM

JellyBeans~
Short ... 'salty' ... and to the point~
Dynamite thoughts ....~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

6 posted 2002-06-17 05:55 PM

Oh~~the way you work your words!!!

Just love this!!! Had a few too many plates myself!!! Hang on for dessert...

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

7 posted 2002-06-19 02:46 PM

sunshine...I know...could it be worse? lol

James, thank you

loner...thank you, glad you liked

LilTai...thank you and yep they tend to...couldn't take too many of them in a row...thanks again

Marge....thank you lady...always appreciate your stopping by and commenting

devina...glad you like my work, its been rather dry lately, but at least one trickles out now and then

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2002-06-19 05:32 PM

Yanno... one of these days, you're going to be served heaping portions of joy... that pendulum has just got to swing. *G*

I like this very much... short and succinct... and aching. *S*

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

9 posted 2002-06-19 05:45 PM

Not even a pickle......Aw well, I've had enough.
Love the illustrative parallel!

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