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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Down I feel as though I can't do anything right, the walls have begun their climb and I just sit in the corner and watch. Promising no tears today didn't work, for they flow easily, in a controlled manner letting go of the suppressed thoughts, those that tend to drift me off into a world of my own, so alone. "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
A very sad collection of thoughts. I've felt the walls, I've cried the tears. An alone that is endless. You did a good job of expressing that in this poem. In truth, what defines us is our poetry. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Believe me, when I tell you, I know how this feels. This is sad. But, do uour best not to isolate yourself. I know how hard this is to do. I tend to do this alot, too. We are all here for you. Try to find something you enjoying doing. Keep your mind occupied. I do try to do this, myself. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WynterGirl~ While this is a 'downer' .... I can tell you that in your 'alone' I think you're in good company with one of the nicest ladies I know~  *Huggers* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
WhiteRose, sometimes it feels good to know you are not the only one feeling the way you do. thank you Sue, Thanks for the talk... *s M Marge...not so sure about that. I think the heat is getting to me. hugsss back M |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen darling heart yet again the beauty of your words conjures such images of solitude. This is utterly uttelry beautiful I love it, and you knew I would, since you always write well that is a guarantee. What isn’t always guaranteed is the effect your words have and this brings a thoughtful muse to my heart. Positively wonderful darling absolutely perfect I love it utterly utterly.   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Maureen, tears can indeed flow so easily but also be thankful for what you have also as many more special promises await you and let tears of joy and anticipation fall! (sigh) This is very heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
me too, girl! me too... |
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