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WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-08-10 06:38 PM

I'll still enjoy
a moonlit night
reading poems
by firelight.

Slipping into
dreams with you
remembering when
we were two.

Alone I'll watch
the stars above.
I'll still read
your words of love.

I'll still see
your handsome face
this love I can't
seem to erase.

But I won't dare
think of your touch
this I fear
would be too much.

WhiteRose

In truth, what defines us is our poetry.

han_tigger
Member

since 2002-08-10

Posts 50
Thundersley, Essex, Uk

1 posted 2002-08-10 06:41 PM

I like this poem, the rhyming works well, as does the imagery.

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

2 posted 2002-08-10 06:50 PM

Wonderful words of love, so beautifully written.

Take care....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-08-10 07:39 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Anne, I can understand this kind of nervousness and my heart goes out to you! I hope now this true love fills your heart, sweet friend, God Bless You, this is sensitive and touching, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-08-10 07:47 PM

Made me smile

Cold hands means a warm heart

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2002-08-10 08:25 PM

If you do....you will probably run out of
cold water in your house......

Nice one WR....

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

6 posted 2002-08-10 08:28 PM

great love poem - very good read - thanks - Paul

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

7 posted 2002-08-10 09:35 PM

I guess it's good to know your limits, even when they keep you from where you want to be.
A beautiful piece, WR.

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

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