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When I First Saw You Happy Birthday Krissy
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When I First Saw You Happy Birthday Krissy |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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When I First Saw You Happy Birthday Krissy When I first looked into your deep blue eyes I felt the jolt of such a surprise No one explained to me just how I’d feel As if naught but you and I were real To feel the gentle touch of your sweet skin You opened your mouth and I fell in To hold you close was my only delight In you I found such warmth and truth's light When I first laid my eyes on your sweet face I thought it held such amazing grace As we lay together contentedly I knew right then this was meant to be I didn’t expect to feel bathed in bliss Or the joy of placing a small kiss Not wanting to let you out of my sight I held you close all through the warm night When I first held you close and tenderly I was amazed at life’s mystery My baby daughter a bundle of love Warm and pink a gift from HIM above You lay there in my arms sweetly sleeping I was so happy I wished to sing Despite the aching and feeling quite sore Love flowed then and will forever more Marsha Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Joey the kangaroo from down under says have a hippy, hoppy birthday. Jump around and enjoy yourself. BTW pretty neat pome for a mom but it's not as good as the one you wrote for me  Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Best wishes to her Mushy! This is very touching.... "When I first held you close and tenderly I was amazed at life’s mystery My baby daughter a bundle of love Warm and pink a gift from HIM above You lay there in my arms sweetly sleeping I was so happy I wished to sing Despite the aching and feeling quite sore Love flowed then and will forever more" Lovely writing Mushy! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
lovely poem for a birthday wish..much enjoyed  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Marsha? My daughter is named "Krista"--follower of Christ---we call her Krissy--and she's all blonde hair, and flip of finger--way too much like me this reminded me of her, and made me ache (she's been gone on a camping trip...and it's killing me...)  sigh...she writes too...  loved this K and M. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Look at all the Moms with a "Krys"...my youngest daughter fits her name so well... Krystal Joy... and often goes by Krys...but I've been known to slip and hug my Krissie a time or two... Happy Birthday, YOUNG LADY.... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Marsha, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, HAPPY BIRTHDAY KRISSY!!! (big hugggssssss) I just know she is going to have the happiest birthday because of the love you share with her, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I saw this last night, Marsha...but I was so tired that I thought if I replied to it, it would be untintelligible.... This is an absolutely lovely and loving tribute to Krissy... There is something about maternal instincts, and first time motherhood... I remember being pregnant with Eric and wondering how I would be able to love him because I didn't feel that instinct yet. But the moment he was born...the very first time I saw him......I fell completely in love with him. By the way...my stepdaughter's name is another Krys....but spelled a bit differently. Her name is Cristin and everyone calls her Crissy.  ~ happy birthday hugs to Krissy and to you for bringing her into the worldLyra |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Ok, Gals! Here's one for you, Maaaaaaashaaaa and one for Krissy 'cause it's her birfday: It makes a person's heart glow with delight when they read the Great Mushy's heartsighs and Krissy is about as cool as a daughter can get n'est pas? Godzilla-sized wishes for great Birfday, Krissy from your friends, Dulcy, Batman, and Jeff. [This message has been edited by ShadowRider (06-16-2002 11:12 PM).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Mushy, does that mean everything you told me about her is a lie!?  LOL! It's a wonderful poem to an equally wonderful little lady....you are both blessed |
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