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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-06-15 07:55 PM



Daddy, May I ?

~*Delaney's Grandma*~

All I could want in the measure of a man
is wrapped up in you, Daddy ...
Please take my hand~

May I have your heart
for the rest of my days ?
Held in your arms in the most loving ways
Together, the two of us ...
forever and always~

Walk me through this big old world
Tell me that I'll always be ...
Daddy's little girl~

~*~

Happy 1st Father's Day
For Delaney's Daddy, David Scott Tindal~
June 16, 2002


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 2002-06-15 08:06 PM


Marge,
stunning image, stunning imagery, it's so loving and simple perfect.
Kethry

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Martie
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2 posted 2002-06-15 08:19 PM


Happy Father's Day, David!!  Hugs to you gramma!
Madame Chipmunk
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3 posted 2002-06-15 08:24 PM


Oh so precious, Marge...
both the poem and the picture...
Delaney is a beautiful little girl

~ Grandma hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2002-06-15 09:00 PM


Marge,
Both are beautiful.

Marilyn
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5 posted 2002-06-15 09:45 PM


Oh Marg....

This was just so..............perfect. You know I am a Daddy's Girl!

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6 posted 2002-06-15 10:27 PM


This is so sweet Marge!
Happy First Father's Day David!
~Hugs~

SmartChick
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7 posted 2002-06-15 10:41 PM


Awwww Marge! This is so sweet. She is just beautiful. So is the poem.
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8 posted 2002-06-15 11:24 PM


Marge
She sure is a cute little tyke!   I love the hat!
LOve the picture and the poem!

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9 posted 2002-06-16 12:14 PM


Marge:  What a perfect Father's Day gift for your son and a wonderful momento to put in Delaney's scrapbook.  She is such an adorable baby!

Betty Lou Hebert

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10 posted 2002-06-16 07:54 AM


Marge...How loving and beautiful is this gift from your heart. Your son will adore it.
You are certainly blessed with an incredibly beautiful, adorable granddaughter. The poetry is exquisite as always.

***Ivy Rose

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11 posted 2002-06-16 07:58 AM



Delaney's father will love this...
and he will soon find a whole wing
of Passions devoted to this wonderful family...

tracie66
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12 posted 2002-06-16 08:22 AM


Oh WOW!!!
*sigh*
Dear Margie girl this is so adorable and look at that darlin lil Delaney, such a sweetie...I'm sure her daddy will teach her many wonderful and inspiring things.
HAPPY FIRST FATHERS DAY TO HIM FROM ME~
~HUGS~ to you all
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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13 posted 2002-06-16 09:39 AM


Happy First Father's Day David!
            Christine

Marge Tindal
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14 posted 2002-06-16 01:30 PM


Thank you ALL~
David came in and read your kind comments ... I'm sure with little Miss Delaney on his lap ~

He's a wonderful father ... together, he and Kim are just the most wonderful parents a little girl could hope to have~

Tomorrow David and Kim celebrate their 2nd Wedding Anniversary~
Congratulations kids ... and you know this ~*Mom*~ ... ~*Grandma*~ wishes you all many more joyous years together~

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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15 posted 2002-06-16 05:18 PM


This is touching Marge...a beautiful baby...James
Marge Tindal
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16 posted 2002-06-16 07:17 PM


JamesMichael~
Thank you ... she's sure cupped our hearts in those loving little hands~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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17 posted 2002-06-19 12:34 PM


May I have your heart
for the rest of my days ?

Something tells me she already knows the answer to that question... and it's a resounding YES! *G*

This is beautiful, Marge. *S* That pic makes me wanna hug her! *S*

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18 posted 2002-06-19 01:31 PM


Soooo precious, Marge - Delaney and the poem!
my3monkeytoes
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19 posted 2002-06-19 01:34 PM


OOO OOO OOO
I loooooove this!
'Twas my hubby's first father's day, too.
What a sweet poem, my friend.

~Sydney McLean

Marge Tindal
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20 posted 2002-06-19 02:41 PM


SweetSutherGal~
Come September ... I expect you to deliver that *HUG* in person !!!
Yeah ... she's kind of wrapped up her Daddy's (and Grandma's) heart~

Denise~
Thank you honey ... it is SO GOOD to see you~
Special *hugs*~

Sydney~
Thank you ... Happy 1st to your's too~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
           noles1@totcon.com                       

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21 posted 2002-06-19 04:40 PM


Oh my gosh  this is the picture I mentioned before that  I just love. That girl and that hat ... mmmm...just want to eat 'er up. What a sweetiepie huggy pooh.

She is just going to love all your words of love when she gets a little older.  Hugs, Marti

" My wrinkles are badges of courage and reveal that I am a Mother."

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22 posted 2002-06-20 02:24 AM


Oh Marge, pls let me carry her, will you? I promise to handle with care ! *wink*

sweet and lovely, both the pic and the poem

mycafe

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23 posted 2002-06-24 05:25 PM


AWWWWEEE!!!!  This is so sweet!  She is beautiful and of course you aren't a proud Grandma or anything! Love it dear friend!
hugs
Cindi

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24 posted 2002-06-24 08:07 PM


MartiSweetie~
She is truly just as sweet and adorable as the picture ... 'sweetiepie huggy pooh' fits her PERFECTLY~
Thank you ... I hope that someday you can deliver those *hugs* in person~
She already loves Grandma's 'whispers of poetry'~

MyCafe~
She's a little bundle of joy to hold~
Come on down !
Thank you dear~

Cindi~
Thanks honey ... yeah, guilty as charged~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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