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Ceinwyn
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0 posted 2002-08-04 03:16 AM


I know
I most definately
Have to get over
The overwhelming feelings
When I am alone
Lying in my bed
Thoughts meandering
Flirting with memories
Amist the clutter
Found within my head
I know
I so
Have to get over
The fact
That maybe
Yeah, just maybe
You would never want me back
That it was never meant to be
And that you really were not meant for me
I know atleast this much
That life goes on
And I count my blessings
And it could be worse
Than it was the day before
Atleast I'm lucky enough
To be able to walk out that door
I just get confused
And misguided
During my brief moments
Despairing and tampering
With disappointment
After disappointment
Why can't just someone love me
Or why will I not allow
Myself to be loved
To feel love
To know that you truly did care for me
And that I will always
Continously push you and everyone else
Close to me away
With my insecurities...

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (08-04-2002 03:17 AM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-08-04 08:53 AM



One thing I learned long ago...
we're never quite done
learning how to grow up...
and yes, my dear, there will be a
light at the end of the tunnel


[This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-04-2002 08:54 AM).]

Rick
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
2 posted 2002-08-04 09:14 AM


Ceinwyn, your problem is the same as we all have, but some of us deal with it differently, seek true love without to great an expectation and all will be well.

True love is all so rare to find,
Though body flirts with pleasure
A soul mate, though we’re told there’s one
Seems thought we only treasure

Can you say, what true love is?
Can you tell me, do you know?
Is it chemistry and fate of life?
A sign that comes to show

I think it’s just a word we use
To think on and reflect
Some happiness and years to share
Some space and some respect

I think true love is special
But only comes to few
As most of us just live our lives
And try to get on through

So tell yourself that happiness
And sharing is just fine
Cos time goes by too quickly
And so much is found in wine

Sincerely
Rick.

Goodluck in love !!!!!

Magnus
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3 posted 2002-08-04 09:46 AM


You put a tear in my eye....your words are
so much from within your heart...spoken
so candidly and so real....

That quality will find love for you...
be yourself, express yourself and
listen to yourself...  They will
listen too!

Moon Dust
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4 posted 2002-08-04 09:53 AM


Yeah I know the feeling

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-08-04 02:26 PM




(smiles) Oh Kristen, I know with all my heart you will seek the light at the end of the tunnel for love is destined to be yours and you will be happy as you deserve to be! (big hugggssssss) This is beautifully heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2002-08-04 02:36 PM


Ceinwyn
Everything in it's time, enjoyed the read.

ThisDiamond
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7 posted 2002-08-04 02:45 PM


Experience directs that it is not our weaknessness that harm us...it is often our strengths.
A deep and honest write, to elevate the aching heart and heal the rift.
ThisDiamond

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