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Honeybee
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0 posted 2002-08-01 11:32 PM



Mirrored Truth Senryu

~*~
When searching for faults
look through your own reflection
not a telescope
~*~

By Melissa P. Monette

© Copyright 2002 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-08-01 11:36 PM


Very beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-08-02 03:50 AM




BRAVO!!! Yes!!! There is little to be practical about in understanding our own faults, for we already know them, we just need to understand them and that is where the heart of it is. (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, such wisdom always fills your words, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-08-02 04:29 AM


I liked this. :-) Thx for the read

There's a peace inside us all
Let it be your friend
It will help you carry on
In the end
There's a peace inside us all
-Creed

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4 posted 2002-08-02 10:39 AM


This is gooood!

Thanks,
Melton

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5 posted 2002-08-02 10:48 AM


This is great! That last line is absolutely priceless, but of course, would be nothing without the 1st two to give it its reason to be.

heheheheh "not a telescope"

EXCELLENT

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2002-08-02 11:27 AM


Melissa,
Enjoyed, very good.

Bill Charles
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7 posted 2002-08-02 11:52 AM


Melissa - how true this is...

BC

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8 posted 2002-08-02 03:43 PM


hey there Honeybee. . . this needs to be on magnets everywhere. . . such wisdom. . .

excellent!!  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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9 posted 2002-08-02 04:10 PM


Well said, Melissa..

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10 posted 2002-08-02 06:16 PM


Wise words, my friend!
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