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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-08-01 04:48 PM


I woke up and looked at the sky
It looked grey haze
Little droplets of rain
Fell from the sky
On this cloudy sky day

Cold hands means a warm heart

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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
1 posted 2002-08-01 04:50 PM


I wish little droplets of rain would fall here. Nice poem.
ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
2 posted 2002-08-01 06:20 PM


Rain and sun are so common here I often wish for snow. LOL

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

CSKpoet
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since 2002-07-12
Posts 845
Island in Paradise
3 posted 2002-08-01 06:26 PM


I have the rain too..
and lots of hot sun
all in a day's time
and both are quite fun

very nice imagry!  enjoyed...thanks

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

LilTai
Member
since 2002-06-08
Posts 189
United States
4 posted 2002-08-01 06:46 PM


I love the rain...This is a nice little poem, I like it a lot

   Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

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