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Krishankins
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0 posted 2002-08-01 12:59 PM



With solitude my only friend
The rest have gone away
At least if I'm all by myself
I know I'll never leave

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

© Copyright 2002 Kristopher Hankins - All Rights Reserved
Lisann
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1 posted 2002-08-01 01:38 PM


good expression of loneliness.....I'm very familiar with this right now.  My one and only friend has recently moved to Mexico and I'm really missing her.  well expressed thoughts in this piece.
Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2002-08-01 01:44 PM


krishankin..

friends are leaves and time is wind
they say eventually they blow back around again, but I always wanted to be an island when I was a kid.

contimplative stuff guy

Sunshine
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3 posted 2002-08-01 01:45 PM



There is some
certainty in this!

VAS
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4 posted 2002-08-01 02:17 PM


That's good, make sure you don't!

If you want company, you could be beside yourself with curiosity

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

mycafe
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5 posted 2002-08-01 09:04 PM


Hi Chris, true friends never really leave you, they always reserve a special place for you in their hearts.  I love Dark Stranger's reply.  Great write!

mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

the_loner_23
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6 posted 2002-08-01 09:13 PM


Great write

Cold hands means a warm heart

SweetSean18
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7 posted 2002-08-01 09:50 PM


Good imagery and tone setting.
Mistletoe Angel
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8 posted 2002-08-01 09:54 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Kristopher, I know the feeling of loneliness ever too well, sweet friend, but always know deep down you are loved by many like me and true joy begins with loving yourself, so let yourself be your best friend then you are bound to be happy forever as we all cheer you on! (sigh) This is a heartfelt and sincere poem, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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