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Sunshine
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0 posted 2002-07-31 04:42 PM



ABCDFGHI

Pullith away from thy mid
Of Import, just as a consonant is
Lack of words now fall my way
Without thy mid, what should I say?


By act of this taunt /pip/Forum7/HTML/000479.html


© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Sven
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1 posted 2002-07-31 04:44 PM


I should taunt as much as I can huh Sun???  

you know, this writing without using that particular thing isn't as hard I you would think. . . LOL. . . !!  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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2 posted 2002-07-31 04:45 PM


Nic rply to th challng. I might hav to try it myslf, Sunshin.

Mik

Said if I only could ...
-KB

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3 posted 2002-07-31 04:45 PM



But what words would I lack
to impart...oh good gravy!

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4 posted 2002-07-31 04:58 PM


GOOD STUFF!!
HUGS!

Sven
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5 posted 2002-07-31 04:59 PM


what's wrong Sun??  just a tiny bit at a loss for finding right words???  

just hold this thought. . . for this word I'm thinking of right now, a that word is waiting to find my mind. . .

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6 posted 2002-07-31 05:03 PM



I was just lucky that your http: did not contain any of that particular unit, thus abolishing my act.

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (07-31-2002 05:04 PM).]

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7 posted 2002-07-31 05:06 PM


you know that I would hold control of all things. . .

I'm good. . .

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8 posted 2002-07-31 06:07 PM


OK,  I'll bit....what is this all about...

No E's????   Huh?  

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9 posted 2002-07-31 06:34 PM




(giggles in delight) At least we get to use the vowels A and O, without me, no way at all! LOL! (big hugggssssss) This is a delightful playful poem, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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10 posted 2002-07-31 06:34 PM


Sunshine - h'mmmm, JKLMNP?

BC

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11 posted 2002-07-31 06:49 PM


E

gad!

cute!

Bridget Shenachie
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12 posted 2002-07-31 07:17 PM


Communication is too difficult without my E's.  No apologies for the pun.

Well-done, Sunshine.

Shenachie

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13 posted 2002-07-31 07:26 PM



I am particular about that fifth part such as you...
but I must follow this act all my way through...

y'all ought to try it!

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (07-31-2002 07:28 PM).]

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14 posted 2002-07-31 07:29 PM


You is so good!

Hugs!
This gurl


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15 posted 2002-07-31 08:14 PM


you lift mi spichliss!
~ hugs from chipmunk

chipmunks usually squeek...but now I'll just have to squawk!

Lyra

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16 posted 2002-07-31 10:15 PM


Oh, how brilliant of you! I'm awww'd.

Hugs, Marti

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17 posted 2002-07-31 11:11 PM


EEEEEEE-Yikes

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18 posted 2002-07-31 11:23 PM


You did a wonderful job SUNSHIN...
cute little write and taunt.....
Lauren~

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I lean against the wind pretend I am weightless and in this moment I am happy

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19 posted 2002-08-01 08:13 PM


it's almost as if you have a lisp *s

M

shows you it can be done ...but you also realize how important the e is.

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20 posted 2002-08-01 08:23 PM


I love your witty sense of humor...still laughing at poem and replies..
smiles< Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

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21 posted 2002-08-01 11:55 PM


I had no doubt that you could do this. Fantastic job!
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