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ShadowRider
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since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038
USA

0 posted 2002-06-14 10:15 PM



'"Guardian Angel"


"Guardian Angel"

Sister of Dawn lifts her web
clothing our shades of day in Forever light -
Be it from the finest threads or
fashioned from simple garb: skirts of safety
speak of harmony dispatched clear and bright.
Dark: the nights without her winged guidance
whose gentle plumes' feathered touch
towers and showers above a souls enflamed desire.
Could you look upon her angelic face
and not relish the secret wonder of trust
Or let misgivings melt like sun-torched snow?
Banish a thought of solitude!
grains of the harvest sit siloed;
heaped before you in creaking strains: full, robust.
Share her basket of heavenly innocence
and listen closely
to the wings whisper
from your Guardian Angel



(C) 2002 Picasso Lyrics




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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2002-06-14 10:23 PM


A gentle visiting well worth our appreciation. ThisDiamond
Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
2 posted 2002-06-14 10:27 PM


Dark: the nights without her winged guidance
whose gentle plumes' feathered touch
towers and showers above a souls enflamed desire

Beautiful wording, Jeff...I enjoyed this very much...

~ winged hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
3 posted 2002-06-14 11:00 PM


Beautiful!!!!! Liam always calls me his angel. He says if he did not find me something bad would have happened to him.

Cold hands means a warm heart

HopeS
Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
4 posted 2002-06-15 01:10 AM


beautifully written and so very touching
Hope

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
5 posted 2002-06-15 01:13 AM


I have to agree with the others...very well done!
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