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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
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of Depression

0 posted 2002-06-14 09:20 AM


Lean leaning against the wall,
Lazed dazed he makes hoot call.
Yo!
Mindless waits for car customers
Hopeless faith he’s just a runner,
Yo!
Goes through life with no anticipation
Has only a simplex salutation,
Yo!
Books were too hard to learn to read,
Looks and clothes is all he needs,
Yo!
One day he’ll rise up and be the man,
When the present drug boss is in the can.
Yo!
Flagged down a undercover cop
Cuffed and going to take the drop
Yo!

Gloom


© Copyright 2002 Aszard Drazlom - All Rights Reserved
bags123
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since 2002-06-06
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1 posted 2002-06-14 09:24 AM


YO! very good dark urban piece. Likesalot!
BrightStar
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since 2001-04-08
Posts 219

2 posted 2002-06-17 10:10 AM


Yo. gloomy.

Admiring you at Passions.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
3 posted 2002-06-17 10:16 AM


Professor Gloom
YO poor soul.

Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641
Calif.
4 posted 2002-06-17 10:27 AM


LOL   I like it  : )
very well done
The lol is not at the write but how I view it... (some are sicker then others you know)
: )
~~ Connie ~~

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