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Music of my Day
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Music of my Day |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Music of my Day I hear the music of my day Thunders fury in worded bray Passions of volcanic force Spilling lava down the course. Belching flames of desire Raging like a forest fire Melting down the stones of past With hedonistic idols cast And comets carry vapor trails Like dragons swishing angry tails Racking up our every core Until they’ve opened every sore. And yet the earth will turn each light Into the arms of soothing night And time will play the game of change The awesome game of rearrange You cannot stop infinity Regardless of virginity |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy, you are amazing! How you come up with one of these incredible writes each morning is beyond me... But I love it...and look for your name every morning now.. Fantastic piece of work here Sy... Enjoyed so very much! ~Big morning hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Enchantress   [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (06-14-2002 09:08 AM).] |
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bags123 Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128 |
Very nice read. Thank you. |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
And time will play the game of change The awesome game of rearrange'' Sy~ simply wonderful, I do enjoy your words much....  Lauren~ Its been a long road |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Love this one SY...especially those last two lines make me smile....What fun it is to read your work! Have a nice one my friend! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
bags123, Glad you enjoyed. Lauren, And I enjoy your comments. ethome, Thank you my friend I look forward to your replies. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy this is truly stunning writing. Always your words flow with hearts sighs, your voice floats through the starry skies like angels’ breath. This is not the soft whispers on the edge of night as you so often write, this is a raging firestorm and it is purely beautiful. As to which of your wondrous writes I only know that whether your words are dropping into my soul like the gentle rain that refreshes the desert or the fire that sweeps through purifying and clearing the way for renewal it is always wonderful. I love the images as always no one can do this so well darling boy. I truly believe this is one of your best utterly utterly perfect Touch me with your wordy smile Walk beside me mile on mile Lift me into that dreamer’s place Where soul’s renewed win life’s race Speak to me in accents true Show me all you can of you Let me look into dragon’s eyes’ And taste again your soul’s sighs Stroll beside me by times shore Murmur songs of evermore Take the stars and spin their light Into webs of soft moonlight Absolutely excellent work   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, Your comments are a kite And your poetry a delight. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'the earth will turn each light Into the arms of soothing night' Poet, you sing my song !!!  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy "And time will play the game of change The awesome game of rearrange" Time just keeps on and you just keep writing with more wisdom. Loved this one! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Thank you dear. Martie, And thank you sweet lady. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And yet the earth will turn each light Into the arms of soothing night And time will play the game of change The awesome game of rearrange Your title is so appropriate... for opening one of your poems is like putting a brand new CD from a favorite musician on to play... I may not know what notes I'll hear... but I know they'll be sweet upon my ear. *S* And your words are always a treat... this is awesome, Seymour! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
So Randy Roars again and steals your pen ...  me thinks that dragon needs a vacation... some fresh air...a day at the beach... Hes been just a bit too Randy to be so Dandy   See...all he needed was some fun in the sun and hes back to being a pussycat.  and as for you...your poetry is the music of my day "And yet the earth will turn each light Into the arms of soothing night And time will play the game of change The awesome game of rearrange You cannot stop infinity Regardless of virginity" cadence of waaaay cool Play it again Sy-babes... winkiewinkie You ... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Where are you finding those cute dragons even Randy laughed. Can't tell you how much I enjoy your replies even if some are little white lies. Winkiewinkie, Randy, Stinky. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sy, even if your poetry were not good... I would still have all of the entertainment to make it worthwhile...enjoyed.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, I thank you much. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I could not have described Isabel's voice any better...well done, Sy!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Balladeer, It's a good thing Isabel doesn't read my responses. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Seymour, this is wonderful, sweet friend, your fabulous words always spark with bright imagery and recite music like the true troubadour you are! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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