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Time Marching Backwards
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Time Marching Backwards |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan 
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Time Marching Backwards The clock on the wall |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
This is absolutely stunning! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
spring follows summer which comes after fall when we peer through life's mirror at the clock on the wall You are such a clever lil chipmunk madame. This verse is wonderful, this poem is beautiful.....(much like the lady who wrote the beauty...    hugsI could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth) |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
All I can say is beautiful. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very beautiful....very creative!! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Very original, enjoyed this very much! And think of it, if time is going backwards, we'd be getting younger, too! Wahoo! Cor |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
lovely you, lovely this....yes, let time move backwards.....for a little while any way..  hugsss Lauren~ Its been a long road |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Delightful....eveyone needs this read! |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
to the Great Lyra-cist: If time is our perception of how to spend life who is to say that we cannot force the arms backwards to relive the memories Birds of a feather, huh, you and I writing clock pieces (no pun intended) on the same day! This is YOU, Munkster, at your writing finest! ~happy day hugs~ jeff |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lyra~ Sometimes we reach deep and find such beauty of thought~ You have sure done that with this piece~ Love it ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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bags123 Member
since 2002-06-06
Posts 128 |
I liked Lotsa! I had this happen to me in 1968. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRILLIANT!!! BRILLIANT!!! I LOVE IT.... Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Sigheyes...I thank you very much, and I am glad you enjoyed it.  ~ hugsLyra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Donna...thanks so much for that extremely effusive compliment... I will dream about that all night tonight... beautiful...hmmmmm! I like that  ~ night time hugsLyra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much, Julie...I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.  ~ lots of hugsLyra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much, Nancy...I certainly value your input, as you are are a wonderfully talanted poet.  ~ poetic hugsLyra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks Corinne, Getting younger...I hadn't even thought of that one... but that would make me VERY happy. ~ hugs for youthLyra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks Lauren...I think we all need a little regression sometimes. ~ regressive hugsLyra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks Eric...tonight, I would love to go backwards in time for just a bit.  ~ hugs in reverseLyra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thank you so much, Jeff...I'm glad you enjoyed the poem...I enjoyed your clock poem also.... I guess we are clockmates, whatever that means  ~ ticking hugsLyra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much, Marge....I actually got the idea when I happened to glimpse a clock in a mirror... That was a couple of months ago and I just wrote the idea down on a scrap of paper. I was cleaning up, the other day ( a rare occurrence lately) when I discovered the scrap of paper....  ~ timely hugsLyra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks so much for your reply, Bags... I would be interested in knowing how time marched backwards for you in 1968 ~ hugs in reverseLyra |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thank you so much, Karen....I am so flattered by your compliment that my head may not fit through the door of the computer room tonight and I may never get to sleep... ~ tick tock hugsLyra |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh my gosh, I know just how you feel, sometimes when the seasons repeat themselves it always feels time is going backwards as spring and autumn seem parallel and summer and winter are opposites like positive and negative! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, I never thought of time this way, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lyra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Thanks Noah...I got the idea for this poem when I looked into a mirror and noticed that there was a clock behind me and it was moving in reverse...it got me started thinking of all of this stuff. ~ timely hugsLyra |
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