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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2002-06-13 10:18 PM


The wind blows

carefree

is the song

~melodies played~

as rain falls
distinctive
are
the sounds
as the

wind
chimes.




I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (06-13-2002 10:23 PM).]

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rwood
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1 posted 2002-06-13 10:21 PM


Sing to me breeze..lovely you! Lovely wind music...Howd' you know I waz listening? Hugs somy~

Sincerely,
Reg

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2 posted 2002-06-13 10:24 PM


As I read this beautiful piece Donna
I could hear my own wind chimes outside my door...
Gosh how I love the sound of them...
And this poem is so lyrical.
Lovely...simply lovely.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2002-06-13 10:26 PM


I'm sitting here with the windows open, the cool breeze blowing, and the soft sounds of rain and wind chimes.....what more inspiration could ya want!
Thanks Reg and Nancy, sure do appreciate you both!!  

I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth)


Madame Chipmunk
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4 posted 2002-06-13 10:28 PM


Just beautiful, Donna...
Wind and chimes were meant to go together...
they make such a glorious sound.

~ windy hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Suetang
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5 posted 2002-06-13 11:36 PM


Hello Donna

This was so very lovely.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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6 posted 2002-06-14 12:53 PM


Donna~

This just has peace written all over it, in it, and on it-- I love this.....soft yet vibrantly heard...




Lauren~


Its been a long road
Getting from there to here
Ive known a wind so cold, seen the darkest days
but now the winds I feel are only winds of change

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7 posted 2002-06-14 09:02 AM


GentleSpirit~
See !!!  There IS inspiration everywhere~
We just have to make the time to listen~

This is lovely sweet poetess~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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bags123
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8 posted 2002-06-14 09:13 AM


Beautiful, as simple as nature. One of my greatest compliments.
Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2002-06-14 09:16 AM


Gentle Spirit
Lovely thought, lovely write.

Sven
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10 posted 2002-06-14 04:40 PM


ahhh. . . now, this is different from you GS. . . I like it. . .

it's just like seeing it. . .

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ethome
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11 posted 2002-06-14 05:02 PM


Yes, you're so right, distinctive is the sound I can hear it in these words!
Gentle Spirit
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12 posted 2002-06-14 06:14 PM


Hey Ya'll thanks so very much.  lol......theres to be lots of rain this weekend, so there might be lots of soggy poetry from here!  Thanks your all so appreciated

I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth)


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