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LilTai
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since 2002-06-08
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0 posted 2002-06-13 09:39 PM



Peace of Mind

My peace of mind
is found in a piece of my mind
and heart
a sanctuary of you and I
locked deep in my solitude I keep you
My peace of mind
lies within the piece of mind
which holds you
In the darkest recess of me
there lies a flickering light
you
you are my peace of mind

   Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2002-06-13 09:45 PM


In the darkest recess of me
there lies a flickering light
you
you are my peace of mind
  

wonderful thoughts Tai.  Well done.  *s*

I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth)


ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923
my own state
2 posted 2002-06-13 09:47 PM


interesting place that piece of mind..nice imagery


the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
3 posted 2002-06-13 09:47 PM


All I can say is awesome.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Madame Chipmunk
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since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
4 posted 2002-06-13 09:50 PM


My peace of mind
is found in a piece of my mind

I really like your play on words here, Tai

nice poem!

~ pieces of hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

LilTai
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 189
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5 posted 2002-06-13 09:51 PM


*giggles* thank you all so much =) you're all too nice to me! *hugs to everyone*
Thanks

   Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2002-06-14 04:50 AM


Very nice...to have peace of mind...James
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