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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2002-07-19 10:46 AM


( Check out my poetry challenge. I know it is easy. But it might be some fun. This is my poem for it.)

"If you call,
I will answer.
If you fall,
I'll pick you up."
It said in a Barenaked Ladies song

So if my love calls
I will answer
And I will fall
In love with you

I can't deny the call
It would be hard to do
If I tried to ignore it
I would be a fool

Cold hands means a warm heart

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vandana
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1 posted 2002-07-19 10:50 AM


enjoy
ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
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2 posted 2002-07-19 02:52 PM


I'm already calling.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2002-07-19 08:35 PM




(smiles) This is soooooo beautifully heartfelt, sweet friend, this is indeed their most sensitive song ever! LOL! I love the Barenaked Ladies because they are a very humorous band who is creative and loves to improv! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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