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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2002-07-18 12:56 PM


S-ometimes I want to see
T-ranquility in this world
R-emember when we all got along
A-lways with smiles upon our faces
W-ith a hug for everyone
B-asically sharing at all times
E-verlasting friendship should have been the result
R-ight?
R-ainbows are made from happy smiles
Y-ellowest pots of gold
S-ometimes are the ones found with love
A-sk everyone you know
L-isten carefully and the bird will tell you
D-on't forget, I love you

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1 posted 2002-07-18 12:02 PM


Now that is a salad I think everyone would enjoy, as I did your little poem.

Nothing means more to me than faith,
family and my friends.

       
Proud Canadian

angelswing
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 705
United Kingdom
2 posted 2002-07-19 12:49 PM


Just like strawberries; this poem is sweet and suculent ... The words you have used are beautiful, -Why can't there be more love, friendship and peace between people generally ?- I enjoyed this poem a lot, well written .
L.of.L. Tom .
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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA
3 posted 2002-07-19 12:51 PM


Awesome words here

Cold hands means a warm heart

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