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With a Simple Word
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With a Simple Word |
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TwoHeartsOnePen Member
since 2002-06-07
Posts 60state of determination |
our love begins here, with words spoken by the heart and heard by the soul whispers in the night that became love by the dawn love, kissed by the sun, that becomes a dance in the moonlight our dance, the dance of sun and moon playing together in colors, shades, and words that tell the story of our love a story that began that first night with such simple words, words that flowed from the heart and joined together with words from another heart words that spoke the same language in the same time with the same emotion and feeling words that became more than lines on a page they became our love and now, we are ready to begin a new page in the story of our love a page that waits to be written on by our two hearts, joined together now as one hand, as one pen writing across the page our hearts and souls sing the song of our love a song we've always known the melody to but, never knew the words until our sun and moon came together to become the light of our love a love that all began with a simple word Distance is the prison for our bodies, but no prison could weaken our passion. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome is all I can say. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"A love that all began with a simple word." I like the reference to the new page...James |
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LilTai Member
since 2002-06-08
Posts 189United States |
This is amazing. Beautifully written =) I love reading your poetry Tai |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I've only had the opportunity to read two of your poems, but I must say you are quickly becoming a favorite of mine. Dawn |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful poem. Sandra |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful...love your name by the way  |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Wow! that's about all I can say!Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Splendid, very sweet words. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It is a wonderful thing, when the right words can bring two hearts together... may it always be so for the two of you... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Your Pen Name is very appropriate. Excellent poem of love.. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
An excellent expression of love here. I await the rest of your story since it seems you have one to tell. How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
An excellent expression of love here. I await the rest of your story since it seems you have one to tell. How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wonderful expression of love....very well done! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ah... What word? What words next? Readin' on! |
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