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from the book of moments, chaper 1
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from the book of moments, chaper 1 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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moments spelled out on the page by an unseen hand in the truest language of living seek to give our being meaning definitions of desire entymologies of existence origins born of the earliest tongues now lost, save for the final speakers holding the traditions of life in their hands are we the tellers of life (or, are we the characters?) speaking that language (written on those pages in red ink) we find that the stories don't end when we run out of ink but when the light is turned out ------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (06-13-2002 04:20 PM).] |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
stories always unfurl, ink or no...as we write them with our lives and progeny survives...nice stuff Sven  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very profound, but I know your words will never run out, even in the dark. Sandra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sven, I think you got that right. Enjoyed |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I always enjoy reading your thoughts, Sven, my friend... *smiles* ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Enjoyed this Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Amazing write my friend! ~Hugs~ *Thank you again for Quiet One* ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I wonder if Einstein had thoughts like these??? Excellent, yes it is... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sven You got it right my friend...Make that a lite beer for me! Nice writing! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
we find that the stories don't end when we run out of ink but when the light is turned out I absolutely loved this, Sven.... its so true!  ~ hugs of the momentLyra |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
lets hope we, you, never run out of ink... how you always touch with your words....stunning moment...dear friend....  Lauren~ Its been a long road Getting from there to here Ive known a wind so cold, seen the darkest days but now the winds I feel are only winds of change [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (06-14-2002 01:05 AM).] |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I'd love to curl up with a book of your famous poetry one day, Sven Pen...maybe even your recorded voice to read it to me.  I'm sighing here, sweet man! How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this Sven...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thank you all my friends. . . may we always have those moments. . . and the ink and paper to write them down on. . . you always inspire me. . .  ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Sven, somehow you made me think of extinct languages and all the wisdom and world views lost along with them. hope your light never goes out.. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
John, You have a light that could never go out, I believe. **just realizing I've read this and replied already**  How grave is my condition, for I cannot find the words to say, I need you so. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I like your writings very much, your thoughts that you captured so well, its always a pleasure to read you. Thanks for sharing dear Sven ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Oh GR8 Voice of the Northlands ... Wonderful! I had almost worn out my dictionary when the lights went out |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! Oh Sven, this is wonderful, sweet friend, yes, our pens as far as I am concerned are always filled with ink that wells from deep within our hearts but once can't write if he or she can't see the words on the notepad! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thanks again to everyone. . . I hope that you all have your own "Books of Moments" to share. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I have to say that Sven's poetry is best when he reads it to you in person. Really, that's the only way to get the whole effect he is going for. Well done, Sven. All writing comes |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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