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remembrances of the soul in Dali
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remembrances of the soul in Dali |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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spectral Divinity radiates from the apature where fluidic space washes against the dam of reason dimensions crash against one another like the atonal phrases of a Messiaen waltz the right hand never knowing what the left is playing but yet, the feet still move in perfect three-quarter time even though they are two lefts perhaps it is not our ears that see the music but perhaps it is our eyes that hear it scrolling by and through the landscape like a stroke of insane Dali genius the lines forming pictures in four aligned dimensions but yet, the hands still covered in pigments of time even though the brushes work quasiphasic, Celestiality pierces the veil of Mourning and brings with it a sensate piece, (peace) cascading across the new painted sky in waves of Diamondaire Gauze and Angelic Being the songs, in quarter-tones of Major and minor sound in ways that imagination can only begin to have and the soul remembers ------------------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Yes, Sven, I have seen music in motion as I watched my mother dip her fingers into the milk of the keys... and I have seen her wrench the tears from the muses themselves... thank you for this lovely, lovely Keeper... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent writing Sven...James |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) WOW!!! Oh my gosh, I love Dali's work, sweet friend, this is wonderfully surreal and details reincarnation and rising and all of thse doctrines in fine detail! (big hugggssssss) I love it, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
There you are, Sweet Man.  Missed your writing around here. It seems that being busy has infected everyone. I haven't been around regularly in a few days or more myself. I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
some special thoughts and images here - so much to ponder - thanks for a great poem - Paul |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Exquisite writing! Have not seen you for a while. Look forward to more of your writing soon! Deb |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
as always *WOW* love it Sven. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, I think my dam of reason has just had a fluid shift. I can feel it sloshing against the edges right now Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I was feeling kind of surreal today, and this finished me off. I am officially becoming a Dali painting. Good work,John. Sandra |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Sven this is way cool... loved every line... o yuh! |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Being an artist myself and having so much of my world revolving around art, this title caught my attention. When I was done reading it I just smiled. It was beautiful. "if you know me so well then tell me which hand do I use?" Tori Amos [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (07-16-2002 12:40 PM).] |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Very, very beautiful. Enjoyed, Sven. Enjoyed. Sincerely, Titus As I'm out there, walking, searching, for myself, for you.... won't you join me? Let's walk this journey together. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This poem just "flowed" Sven... and it was so very cool!  ~ flowing hugsLyra |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Lady in White, I too have seen that music. . .and know what it can do. . . thank you. . . James, thank you my friend. . . Noah, hmmm. . . yes, there is a lot of doctrine here. . . but, perhaps you should just look for the thought of it. . . thanks as always. . . Temptress, no. . . I haven't gone anywhere. . . just been away for a while. . . thank you for keeping the light on. . . Goodknight, that's me. . . I always try to leave you with something to think. . . it's what I do. . . thanks. . . Deb, thanks. . . it's good to be missed. . .and I look forward to seeing more of your work as well. . . Charisma, if I can get a "wow" from you, then I know that I've done well. . . thank you my friend. . . Kethry, then perhaps my friend, you should let the dam open. . . and see what comes out. . . thanks. . . Sandra, I hope that you're not becoming too much of a Dali painting. . . I would hate to see you bend at strange and bizarre angles. . .  thanks. . .walt, I knew that you would enjoy this my friend. . .from one cummings nut to another. . . DE, so good to see you again my friend. . . I'm glad that I could make you smile. . . it's another one of the things that I try to do. . . thank you. . . Titus, glad that you enjoyed my friend. . . thank you. . . Lyra, the flow is what it's all about my friend. . . thanks. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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