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SlashedsoulHollowman
New Member

since 2002-07-14

Posts 2

0 posted 2002-07-14 05:12 PM

In the ruins of this dream cast true
lies the dust of memories, of you
My picture was colorful, bright as day
until your indescision took them away
Crushed and vanquished to a land unknown
reaping these seeds of a love freshly mown
Cut to death and ground up fine
no longer my eyes see the sunshine......

Rich

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2002-07-14 05:15 PM

Welcome to Passions, where there is a lot of healing. Sounds like the relationship went wrong, hope you find things to be right here. Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting.

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2002-07-14 05:16 PM

Very nice title...describes your thoughts well...James

CSKpoet
Senior Member

since 2002-07-12

Posts 845
Island in Paradise

3 posted 2002-07-14 08:54 PM

Welcome..I am also new..I liked your emotional write..sorry for the feelings that the muse endured tho...I look forward to seeing more posts.
Cher

aloha... with warm regards

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2002-07-14 08:56 PM

Welcome to Passions! Very cutting intense piece!

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

5 posted 2002-07-14 09:06 PM

A well written first post
Welcome, you will find it very...comfortable here.

~wranx

"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2002-07-14 11:39 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Rich, this is such a sad but powerful debut, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and you have come to the right place to share your feelings with us all, we are all here to comfort you and inspire you further! Welcome to Passions, sweet Rich, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! (sigh) I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rich, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (07-14-2002 11:39 PM).]

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

7 posted 2002-07-15 04:15 AM

welcome back!

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

8 posted 2002-07-15 06:10 PM

Writting down your feelings is on of the most effective and low cost therapys known.I know you will get a lot of support from the people here at Passions.

paladin

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