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Epiphany
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Epiphany |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Epiphany The bloom of an epiphany Flowered on my vine of scope It came to me in irony A time when I was loosing hope The bud was growing in the shade Underneath a patch of lean But only brown did show in fade And nothing of the lovely green But there it lay in rare expose Beneath my eyes far sighted leer Exposed but inches from my nose Belief so near and yet so clear I reached my hand out to the know And touched a Vail of ecstasy And love spread over me in flow And washed away the agony The golden garden and its yield That I had searched so far a field |
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Music Maker Member
since 2002-07-07
Posts 152THE ORIGINAL !!!! |
Seymour, I have to put pen to paper (metaphorically!), once again to tell you of my delight when I read your beautiferous words. So much so, that as a 'newbie' to this Forum, and the written poetic word, that I went back and read more of your wonderous lines. Oh that I would be given such a fantasmagoric gift that you have. Kind thoughts, John Grass won't grow under feet that don't move. [This message has been edited by Music Maker (07-14-2002 07:39 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The veil was but a fog of dew and yet, I know, that it was you... Ah Sy...you've welcomed my morning very well... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
But there it lay in rare expose Beneath my eyes far sighted leer Exposed but inches from my nose Belief so near and yet so clear I reached my hand out to the know And touched a Vail of ecstasy And love spread over me in flow And washed away the agony The golden garden and its yield That I had searched so far a field ======================================= Dear gifted Poet ... Dear gifted Poet ... oh how your garden grows. With silver bells, gold daffodils ... and your prize rose of suppose. This Eden's gate, this Shangri La, that blooms verdant in your mind. Planted by fate ... seeded with time ... cultivated by rhyme ... tended with kind. In a poet's garden of ecstasy, blooms an eloquent epiphany. A dreamscape where butterflies are free ... where Nature and Mankind live in harmony. Dear gifted Poet ... Dear gifted Poet ... If this garden exists ... only you could grow it.  Music Maker is right...your rhymes rock  *ww*   |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I can't think of a more wonderful way to start my Sunday.. than this beautiful read by you dear Sy! Wonderful indeed... ~morning hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
John, Could not ask for a nicer comment, thank you. Sunshine, The veil was but a fog of dew and yet, I know, that it was you... You are so bright this morning.  JM, Dear gifted Poet ... Dear gifted Poet ... If this garden exists ... only you could grow it. And you have. Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky Enchantress, Good morning sweet thing. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Seymour, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I believe time makes many blessings possible and when we are patient and walk on, all a sudden through our despair we find that blessing upon a pedestal and it changes our lives forever and makes us smile! (big hugggsssssss) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Seymour - what a wonderful poem and how ofte we do sit with answers right before us - well maybe the search is part of the delight - loved your poem - Paul |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Paul, I believe you are right, Thank you. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
"I reached my hand out to the know" And each time you do, we learn... and we look forward to every lesson. *S* This is beautiful, Seymour. *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, And you are beautiful. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy The lessons that are in front of us if we look are amazing. So wonderful to hear of yours in this possitive and hope-filled poem! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I reached my hand out to the know And touched a Vail of ecstasy And love spread over me in flow And washed away the agony This has such a lovely feeling to it, Sy... I think that we all have responsibility for our own happiness and that reaching out for it, is the best way of getting it.  ~ hugs of happinessLyra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lyra, Thank you again for the read and wise comment. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Sorry about that, you some how crossed. Thank you sweet and I'll post again when I get back. |
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