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Will You Marry Me?
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Will You Marry Me? |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA 
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On this day a young man is gonna ask his girlfriend to marry him He is out searching for the perfect ring He already set up a dinner date He goes into the jewelry shop Looks at all the rings Then after an hour He spots the perfect one for her As the time draws nearer Nervousness sets in His heart beats 100 beats a minute He hopes that is the limit Later that night they are at dinner She can tell he is nervous Then he gets down on one knee She asks, "What are you doing?" He says, "Asking you to marry me." He opens the box with the ring in it She stares at him and then the ring Tears fill her eyes As she says yes Then he slips the ring on her finger And says, "Soon we will be married. Together forever." Cold hands means a warm heart [This message has been edited by the_loner_23 (07-12-2002 12:10 PM).] |
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LWF31407 Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 78 |
Lovely! |
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GoddessofHell Member
since 2002-07-09
Posts 76 |
This is so sweet. Enjoyed it very much. Thanks Heather |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Julie, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I cried reading this because I dream of living this day so so much and sharing this happy moment with the girl I love, Joanna! (kiss on cheek) This is soooooooooo romantic, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." Shakira [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (07-12-2002 09:10 PM).] |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Julie - a special revealing of a very special moment for many couples - your poetry captures the moment in a very special way - thanks for your lovely poem - Paul |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I hope that this lovely poem is about yourself, Julie...  ~ hugs engaged in reading poetryLyra |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Quite lovely! Enjoyed.  Sincerely, Titus As I'm out there, walking, searching, for myself, for you.... won't you join me? Let's walk this journey together. |
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