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ecrivan
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my own state

0 posted 2002-07-11 11:53 PM



Summer vacation means more people on highways
sedentary gents watch traffic along byways
take a moment.... reflect
responsabilities we have and neglect
save a victim from traffic floods?
yes... for highway accidents...
give blood.


© Copyright 2002 Martin Dansky - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2002-07-11 11:54 PM


Very good

Cold hands means a warm heart

Madame Chipmunk
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2 posted 2002-07-11 11:59 PM


A very good, socially responsible poem, Martin...
~ hugs and blood

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

ecrivan
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my own state
3 posted 2002-07-12 08:22 AM


yes, everybody think of lives you can save thanks for reading


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