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she flew with butterflies of blue
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she flew with butterflies of blue |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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She Flew With Butterflies Of Blue ~*~ Pointless waiting so she flew with butterflies of blue where green mountains weep and the silent abyss sleeps until the water fell into teacups of silence now softly resting on butterfly wings in mountains of green she wails no more BloomingRose |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
silent abyss sleeps teacups of slience those are really powerful images - lovely poem - I liked it lots - Paul |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is breathtaking, may sweet thoughts of summer always fill your heart with delight, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Speechless Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Wow. I love the imagery. This one is deep. Very well done. Nan(Pilgrim variety) |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
where green mountains weep and the silent abyss sleeps until the water fell into teacups of silence Ohhh how that verse just swept me off my feet (so2speak)... Lovely writing BloomingRose... Thanx4a sweet read... Hugs2uPoetFriend *~coco~* |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
this is delightful, well penned BloomingRose. ~hugs~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Thank you all for reading. I know this one is a bit different. I was feeling a bit down and wishing I had wings. Butterflies seem peacefully content, so what better way to fly! Hugs to all, Deb |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Pointless waiting so she flew with butterflies of blue where green mountains weep and the silent abyss sleeps ============================== you know ya had me from the title  your gift of imagery is showcased in this lovely delicate write Deb Beautiful gem of pen  Now for me some words come easy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BloomingRose Bright palatte for a dreamy painting. Enjoyed |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Did you know that your imagery and your special way of bringing it to us has grown a hundred fold since knowing you? You paint sereneness so well in this piece and every once in awhile we all need to escape, even if it is only in our minds. Very beautiful indeed. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
BloomingRose, IWIHWT! Magnificent. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
JM~ I know you do like butterflies. Glad it grabbed your attention! Thanks for reading! Seymour~ Thank you so much ~Mark~ I am so glad you notice an improvement in my writing. Coming from one as gifted as you, I consider that a real compliment! Kethry~ I don't know what all those letters stand for, but I thank you anyway lol! |
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