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The Dance
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The Dance |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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The Dance ~*~ Feelings slice the night as hot stars burst in delight a forever hunger is satisfied in eyes that dance in golden silence BloomingRose |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
Deb, your pen wields well today... fine write, this... |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
This is sooooo beautiful!!! Neeraja |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
Very beautiful and succinct. It's rare that someone can use so few words and still put across such a complete idea and image. Loved it.  "Silly bunny, there are no monsters in here." - Chrys, from Gloom Cookie |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BloomingRose Don't recognize the artist but I do the poem. Lovely, enjoyed. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
very nice poem - liked it lots - Paul |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo beautifully passionate, sweet friend, I just love how your words always dance with such grace, this is breathtaking, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
ENJOYED |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautifully written Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I always did enjoy a good dance, but it always takes me forever to describe what you did so beautifully in so few words. Lovely verse and even lovelier thoughts. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Thank you all for your kindness. I appreciate you all for taking time to read. Hugs, Deb |
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