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Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2002-07-10 03:00 PM


the truth of light lies in the darkness of fates own garden
the garden of fate
watered by tears of silence
tears flourish from the eyes
which stare from the clouds
white from colors deathless breath
dust heaving upon groundless rocks
hiding past with future
laying on the groundless floor
sinking downwards towards the only door
where the light lies beyond
the truth hanging on by golden broken threads
the fate of darkness
brings forth thee to the garden
lock and key
tears of silence make thee's garden whole
what is the garden that you see
where is this place
I'm dreaming of
what is this really of
the truth of light lies in the darkness of fates own garden

© Copyright 2002 Kellie M. Cantrell - All Rights Reserved
Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296
Michigan
1 posted 2002-07-10 03:10 PM


A masterpiece of wisdom, Kellie...
And who ever said that you had to be old to be wise?
excellent in every way and every word.
~ poetic hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
2 posted 2002-07-10 04:21 PM


Cold hands means a warm heart

Larry C
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Member Patricius
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286
United States
3 posted 2002-07-10 06:21 PM


Kellie,
And Lyra knows... So very well done. Impressive. Thanks.

Show you care to those you love...today.

Daniel van Vliet
Member
since 2001-08-31
Posts 80

4 posted 2002-07-10 06:44 PM


.... I love the imagery in this poem. Well Done!
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