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Searching in your eyes.
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Searching in your eyes. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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This is dedicated to my girlfriend. Searching in your eyes, I spot myself, How naked I am Surrounded by your beauty, Your luscious lips, Are mine to kiss, Every time you smile My heart is let loose, As we walk together, I wish for no end, You spot me with your eyes, And I exhale, Let loose my fears, Knowing that you are real, In this heat of passion, I lose the sense of time, Being next to you, Is all that matters, To keep your scent, How can I wear you? As not to wrinkle our moments, And the sweetness that we share, Death seems right, If my finals moments, I am in your care. Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.) [This message has been edited by Xeonox (07-08-2002 12:20 AM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautiful Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Love is a many splendor things! Wonderful!!! Kris A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Xeonox- What lovely sentiments for your girlfriend. "How can I wear you? As not to wrinkle our moments" I love that part!  Very well done. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
thanks for the response. She loved the poem too. Ronil (A mask for everyday. Imagine a life without them.) |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Very lovingly written! |
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