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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2002-07-07 07:48 AM


Observation of Balladeer

The Visit

I saw him squint a southern view
A sly smile a twitch full of know
He tapped his foot and that the clue
Mischief filled his mind, poor toe.

No need to jot notes on paper
He has a photographic mind
In that mind he wrote a caper
And put in passions a muse of find.

He works in eccentricity
Cartoonist that accentuates
The floors of our audacity
By comic points of punctuates

And he follows no laws of taste
But puts them plain as you can see
To him the laws would be a waste.
No matter who of you or me

He is a grind of peppers mill
And sometimes over does the spill.



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Lady In White
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1 posted 2002-07-07 07:57 AM



It does sound as if there is much more to
come,
so let the pepper fly...

Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2002-07-07 08:18 AM


LOL ... Wonderful Sy!  It sounds as though there is some fun brewing?  I hope you're having a wonderful visit with Suthern ... wish I was there with you all too.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2002-07-07 08:30 AM


Sunshine,
You little devil you.

Kit,
I wish you were there too. Miss you

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Canada eh.
4 posted 2002-07-07 08:47 AM


Ah, I wish I were there!
Sounds like great fun!
Maybe one day.....maybe.
~Morning Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Janet Marie
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5 posted 2002-07-07 09:22 AM


I think the room was blessed with an abundance of poetic talent...and friendship...love the comraderie and humor in this Sy-babes.
I'm sure you and Michael inspire each other in many ways. Both are exceptional poets in your own right (write).

  

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2002-07-07 10:00 AM


Enchantress,
Wish you were too,

JM,
It was very nice, suthern is very sweet and pepper is doing better. I'll write to you today. WWRS Love ya

ecrivan
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7 posted 2002-07-07 12:10 PM


a lot of dishes can arise
when the peppers start to fly
so continue on your writes
don't let the bugs bite

enjoyed the read


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8 posted 2002-07-07 02:14 PM




(giggles in delight) Oh Seymour, I betit ust have been so delightful to meet him, sweet friend, I wish I was there too, maybe if I meet Joanna this summer I may meet him also because he lives not far away, LOL! (big hugggssss) This is delightful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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9 posted 2002-07-07 03:15 PM


Very well said of our 'deer....

thanks Sy....

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2002-07-07 04:04 PM


ecrivan
Exactly, thanks for the read.

Noah,
I hope so noah, we'll keep our fingers crossed.

Magnus,
Thanks for the read my friend.

Madame Chipmunk
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11 posted 2002-07-07 05:05 PM


I haven't met the legendary Balladeer in person yet, but from everything I have seen and heard, it looks like you may have nailed him perfectly...ouch!!!!!
If my health permits, maybe I'll get to meet all of you this Sept.
~ hugs of fun

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Ivy Rose
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12 posted 2002-07-07 05:26 PM


Seymour...Wonderful, light read.  Your humor and joy for life and poetry show through.

***Ivy Rose

Seymour Tabin
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13 posted 2002-07-07 08:21 PM


Lyra,
I sure hope so. Thanks for the sweet reply.


Ivy Rose
Nice reply thank you.

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