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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas 
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The day remembered her beauty Her voice amongst the breeze Glimpsing her breath inside the sun She turned, again she leaves A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
yep yep have I mentioned I enjoy your work yet? LOL!  I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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mycafe Senior Member
since 2002-05-23
Posts 584 |
aw...so beautifully written! ~mycafe Keep counting your blessings |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Kristopher, this is sooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this had me envisioning the beauty of a lover fading into the sunset as one dreams but only to awaken in the morning and kiss her lover again! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh my...I'm liking this one...  |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Short but sweet and also very very sad, I enjoyed it very much, Kristopher  ~ hugs of helloLyra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dang you're good!! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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