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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-07-06 06:37 PM



Defenseless

how did he get
through my defenses
the walls I built
that started in fences
they were formed
solid thick rock fear
to protect hide me
letting no one near
did he go over tunnel under
go straight through
it must have been
a secret just he knew
I find myself falling
in this state of adore
and he has shaken
me right to my core


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Magnus
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1 posted 2002-07-06 07:12 PM


Wow,  Helen that is an awful lot of adore...

and she whispers to the mysterious man...

More....that I might adore thee even more...

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2 posted 2002-07-06 09:43 PM


That was a very interesting way to put a question. One I've asked myself a thousand times. I hope your creativity continues to flow like this. I love it!!!



Krishankins

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3 posted 2002-07-07 01:04 AM


Helen,
Aha! It can be done...cool.

Show you care to those you love...today.

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4 posted 2002-07-07 02:27 AM


You too, eh?

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

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5 posted 2002-07-07 08:31 PM




(smiles) Wow, I love this, sweet friend, the fort in our hearts may hold off almost everyone, but there will always be that special love that no defense can ever draw back and love can penetrate and take our hearts by suprise! (sigh) This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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