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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-07-06 04:01 PM





Breathless Romance

tonight
candles will dance
with yellow blue
blaze
and I
will see
the echo
of my soul
reflected
in a
thousand ways
following steps
of a musicless
dance
and I
am in a
breathless
romance

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (07-06-2002 04:06 PM).]

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Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2002-07-06 05:44 PM




and I
will see
the echo
of my soul
reflected
in a
thousand ways

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Now those are some powerful words and to some they could be a bit scary.  Wonderful read.  I enjoyed much.

Krishankins
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since 2002-06-23
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2 posted 2002-07-06 05:46 PM


OOOOOOH!!! AAAAAAAAAHHHHH!!!  I LIKES!!



Kris

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

Larry C
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since 2001-09-10
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3 posted 2002-07-07 01:06 AM


Helen,
Is that similar to that motionless dance I wrote of?

Show you care to those you love...today.

Temptress
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since 1999-06-15
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4 posted 2002-07-07 02:29 AM


yes yes yes

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

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