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Thoughts In The A.M. or (Here In My Time Zone) |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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I am so lost in the quake of missing you that an enraged insomnia covers my will to sleep. There are so many dark moments of my days and they all need the multiple hands that seem to reach out from your light. I am love Multiplied by some mathmatical concept that I was never able to grasp. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Moments of missing you trickle down my page. Sleep soon will breathe with an all day ferocity due to the lack of indulgence in its rightful space. I can only hope that in dreams I don't see you beside me ...already had to let you go away in the real of life Please don't let my dreams hand to me the same tortures. I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. [This message has been edited by Temptress (07-06-2002 03:27 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
aww...once let go is enough .. I love the way you write...I have had this happen, too...but now I won't let it happen in my fantasy...real is bad enough *s hugs M |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"I can only hope in my dreams I don't see you beside me." These are the thoughts when we finally realize that we must let go...and then all these thoughts are not welcome any more...James |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Temptress I enjoyed the read and the write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Enjoyed so very much this summer afternoon. It's sad enough to say good bye to someone is real life... then to have it happen again in dreams,..no way. ~Hugs~ |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
jen...this left a heavy lump in my throat...and hurt my heart...mississippi sisters of the mud...sisters of the soul...helen |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh, how well I understand these thoughts. Well done. Sandra |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Take two aspirin..... turn on all the lights...the tv, etc....and surely you won't have to worry about sleeping.. Seriously, this had a lot of feelings, and certainly a message of pain, trying to stop missing someone.......with the reminders of sleep and dreams to add to the prob... [This message has been edited by Magnus (07-06-2002 07:52 PM).] |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
you are so powerful with word and emotion....so good to read you...  Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Thanks for the thoughts and compliments, everyone.  Don't worry though. It was only a temporary goodbye.  to all who read this...I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
You now need to write a poem called Only a Temporary Goodbye. (aol voices in my head) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, me too |
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