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vandana
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0 posted 2002-06-12 10:49 AM



I promise
Every word I say
Every word I say
It comes from my heart
I promise to you
From bottom of my heart
I promise
That my heart belongs to you
And I promise to you
I promise you
Because I care
I never hurt you
I love you too much
So I promise you
I promise you this
As I say every word
Is true
Please believe me
What I say
Iam promising you
With alll my heart
I care for you
No matter what
And I promise to you
Every word I say
I promise (to you)

[This message has been edited by vandana (06-12-2002 10:50 AM).]

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Dark Stranger
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1 posted 2002-06-12 11:07 AM


van, they might think the got ya now..
but I guess that is ok?
enjoyed the sincere of this

DawnG
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2 posted 2002-06-12 02:08 PM


sometimes the simplest of messages are the most beautiful of all.

                            Dawn

cpalmer
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3 posted 2002-06-12 03:13 PM


Vandana,
This is really neat! I agree with Dawn, the simpilest words have the most meaning!
Thanks for sharing!
Cindi

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4 posted 2002-06-12 03:28 PM


That was so beautiful. 2 thumbs up.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sven
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5 posted 2002-06-12 04:12 PM


a promise kept my friend. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2002-06-12 04:17 PM


Enjoyed...James
Kethry
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7 posted 2002-06-12 06:02 PM


vandana,
there is much in the making of a promise and much in the keeping of a promise and much in the good telling of a promise, as you have done.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Gentle Spirit
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8 posted 2002-06-12 07:03 PM


A beautiful promise Vandana.  *s*

I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~~(Garth)


Mistletoe Angel
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9 posted 2002-06-17 07:38 PM




(smiles) Oh Vandana, this is one of my favorites from you yet, sweet friend, the most beautiful part of true love to be faithful and I know you will always make your love happy as I hope your love will always make you happy! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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10 posted 2002-06-17 07:45 PM


...BEAUTIFUL...

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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