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TriXter
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The One

0 posted 2002-07-05 09:22 PM



How many days have i tried to confront you
and how many days have i tried to love you
how many days,months,weeks,years have i tried to be with you
and how many days have you been on my mind,cause how many minutes have i thought of you
so far its about six million ninehundred and fifty two
How many days have i thought and ponderd if we could ever be, you love the chase and i love the catch
how many times have i sat down and wrote, about you, about me, about everything in my heart
and how many days have i sung by myself so i can play my part.

How many days have i lost my faith,
and how many days have i missed my chance
how many times have you walked right by
then again, how many times have you stoped to say hi
How many days does my mind say, No way
but How many times do youre freinds say, shell' say yes
But theres been too many days, too many times where my hearts been shatterd and tatterd and torn apart
to the point where i cant move on, where i just want to stop.

How many days have i talked about you
How many days do i ignore everything around, just to look at youre smile
How many times do i look at the pictures of us, after youve been gone for just a while
and How many days do i remind myself that you might not say yes to bein more then freinds,
How many times do i look you in the eyes and get lost
How many times do i want to ask you, where my heart is the cost
and How many days Do I just stop and stare when youre standin there?
Soon I can Share all my days with you,
But how many times have i said that line?
apparently its been said....far too few.


The man of few words...

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Poet deVine
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1 posted 2002-07-05 11:53 PM


This was good...I'd  have formatted it differently with horter lines...bt I think the whole thing is good!!
Duncan
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2 posted 2002-07-06 01:56 AM


I love counting, so thought this was cool!


Forgetting all I'm lacking
Completely and complete
I'll take your invitation
You take all of me

Lifehouse

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2002-07-06 04:34 AM


It sounds like its been quite a few...hope good things happen for you...james
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