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A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2002-07-05 09:02 PM


Subtle Sighs

As a silhouette
waltzes in play
upon the bedroom wall

a subtle sigh is heard
as a whisper between lovers
begs for more….


Annie  © 7-5-02

ever deep...runs
the wishing well
for fairytale illusions

© Copyright 2002 Annie - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2002-07-05 09:52 PM


Annie, this is lovely...softly sensual.
I have missed your writing.
~Hugs~

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2002-07-05 11:10 PM


Annie, this is so very tender and lovely.
Wonderful write, good to see your words tonight.  hugs.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}


Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 2002-07-05 11:57 PM


Oh this is so beautiful!!! I love it..and wish it was longer.
Duncan
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4 posted 2002-07-06 12:05 PM


a subtle sigh is heard
as a whisper between lovers
begs for more….

But the brevity allows room for the mind to wander through the moment.  I really liked this!


Forgetting all I'm lacking
Completely and complete
I'll take your invitation
You take all of me

Lifehouse

Temptress
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5 posted 2002-07-06 03:35 AM


lovely lovely

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2002-07-06 04:43 AM


Like those whispers...James
Magnus
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7 posted 2002-07-06 01:03 PM


Oh yes.....I am liking this one a lot....
Surely,  your pen name ties heavily to words
like these....  

A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale
8 posted 2002-07-06 10:29 PM


Everyone,  thank you so much...I have missed the warm poets that mingle here.

ever deep...runs
the wishing well
for fairytale illusions

EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
9 posted 2002-07-07 01:07 AM


I very much enjoyed this!

Maybe all one can do is hope to end up with the right regrets.  ~Arthur Miller

Mistletoe Angel
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10 posted 2002-07-07 05:43 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is beautiful, sweet friend, may the beasuty of passion always touch your heart with echoing sighs of true love! (kiss on cheek) This is sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautifrul heart, sweet Annie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

mycafe
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11 posted 2002-07-08 09:36 PM


hmmm.... a nice sensual treat here !

~mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

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