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True Love |
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inspiredpoetwriter Member
since 2002-01-05
Posts 104Minnesota |
07/05/2002 True Love (Woman) Tonight I lay inside you arms I listen to the song that beats from your heart Remembering the aftermath of our love making that Melted me to you body connected me to you soul Looking our I see the stars I count My blessings on the same glowing star lord protect him My knight and shinning love. (Man) Falling a sleep warm & secure This woman is my goddess heaven sent to me She’s so beautiful when she sleeps, cuddle her Close to me I remember saying to her you Free to fly come sore with me she took my hand with trust and love Lord let her know she’s everything to me my angel of love the Ground under my feet. (Woman) Walking slowly I go sit in the living room sitting By the fire, flicking flames dance on the wall A tear runs down my face happiness & peace have Finally come my way he wont make me cry Clock is ticking away the hours of my forgotten pain My forgotten sorrow. (Man) Deeply those blue eyes send a tremble through my body Hearing the sound of your laughter brightens The mood in my spirit, when you cry I’ll wrap my body Around you & comfort you, and be there to lean on, And have to hold, and protect? I smile at you cause you’re the Only one who understands. (Woman) I wrote you this to tell you a secret that I’ve kept for you Along time, when we first met I right then and there feel in love With your loveable personality your true speak able mind And those rock hard muscles that brought me to a melting sensation The feel of your hot sweet body pressed to mine every time gives me Pleasure and the satisfaction I believe in. (man) At your side I lay a single red rose to declare My love I’ll never leave you without a fight to get you back Tomorrow will come & you’ll take my breath away like You do everyday when I’m with you, when I ask you to Marry me I’m hoping that you’ll say yes to us to start Our feature make a family have a happy life as We do now. ©Ang "02" ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥iM a PoEt WhO wRiTeZ Wit HeR Heart ¥¤¥¤¥¥¤¥¤¥ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
turned out pretty good...always proof read what you're posting though for typos before you post it. It makes it easier to read. Nice subject matter. I personally don't believe in love, but who knows? |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I think we all search for true love..this is a lovely tale of love found.  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
enjoyed your words of loving... *s M |
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