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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2002-07-04 08:01 PM


My Life My Love

I know of desire.
I know that some are
not worthy of trust.
I know that people use people
to satisfy their lust.

I know you can
never outlive a lie.
I know that you cannot make
another love you no matter
how hard you try.
I know that sometimes memories are
all we have left after a sad goodbye.

But what I really want to know
is will love perform for her and I.
Yes I want to know that the
power of love will get us by.

For I can not bear to see selfish
reasons cause my love for her to fall.
My life my love I give to her.
For love I will give my all.

JamesLee
July04
2002

© Copyright 2002 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Krishankins
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1 posted 2002-07-04 08:04 PM


"For love I give my all"
I really like this line. I wish more people would feel this way.

Wonderful write J.M.!!

Krishankins

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Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-07-04 09:54 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh James, I know with all my heart you would always be faithful to your love and I hope that she too is willing to give you equally! (sigh) This is very honestly heartfelt, sweet friend, I wish the best for you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Temptress
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3 posted 2002-07-05 01:24 AM


ME TOO!!

bump monster prowling tonight..

This should not have been passed up.

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

Neeraja
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The Netherlands
4 posted 2002-07-05 04:53 AM


And so it should be... a nice write James!
Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia
5 posted 2002-07-05 07:00 AM


Hello James

This was so very beautiful.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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Victoria Australia
6 posted 2002-07-05 08:27 AM


James,
I love the soft feel of this.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Auguste
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7 posted 2002-07-05 12:15 PM


James, I consider this one of your finest works.

Michael

Sven
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8 posted 2002-07-05 03:25 PM


James my friend. . . you have always listened to the voice of love. . . and that is what makes you who you are. . . and I am thankful for that. . .

superbly done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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