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deleeme
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0 posted 2002-07-04 06:05 PM


Bow
Not Thy
Head,O Blest
A M E R I C A
Unless it be in Thanks
For our Precious Heritage
And our Birthrite as Citizens
Of the Greatest of Nations on earth
As  the  product of Divine Providence.
Go forward with your Mandate of freedom
Pursuing   National  Destiny
Showing compassion and power
Seeking to uphold Justice
Promoting  Harmony
Among the Nations
I n t e grity
Stewardship
And your
Love.


© Copyright 2002 David L. White - All Rights Reserved
Krishankins
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1 posted 2002-07-04 08:09 PM


I haven't seen this style in a while. I like the patriotism displayed. Nice write!!

Krishankins

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Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-07-04 09:51 PM




BRAVO!!! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, YES, may we raise our colors of freedom and help others always see those colors and wish for their freedom and love always too! (smiles) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet David, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-07-05 01:22 AM


bump monster on the prowl...looking for work that shouldn't have been passed up.
enjoyed.

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

ellie LeJeune
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4 posted 2002-07-05 06:17 AM


I was so glad to see this wonderful tribute to our country, David...I was so intuned with how blessed we are this Fourth and feeling very grateful. Terrible that the tradgedy of 9/11 has given all of us a new perpective on the treasure we hold as Americans. This is truly a poetic masterpiece as well! Hugs to my dear friend,

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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