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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-07-03 02:24 PM



Heard


of all
the people
that hear you
I listen


© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2002-07-03 03:16 PM


Beautiful Helen...and so much said in less than ten words.
~Hugs~

Krishankins
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2 posted 2002-07-03 03:18 PM


shallow in words but deep in thought.
i like

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

jwesley
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3 posted 2002-07-03 10:35 PM


...so glad am I, as the things I say are meant for You.

jwesley

Neat piece...

j.

GRMcLean
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4 posted 2002-07-03 10:47 PM


This poem says to me, that to really "hear" someone, you have to say very little, which is what your poem does.  That's nice, and shows the point well in it's breviety.  Good job.
Magnus
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5 posted 2002-07-03 11:22 PM


If the E.F. Hutton of PiP speaks,  I guess
that means Slick listens....???

Like this message..

bslicker
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6 posted 2002-07-10 03:28 PM


I know

Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

ecrivan
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7 posted 2002-07-10 03:36 PM


yes there is beauty in silence and in being heard..neat piece


turtlefreak1979
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8 posted 2002-07-11 03:22 PM


i love it, so few words but such deep meaning!  

[This message has been edited by turtlefreak1979 (07-11-2002 03:22 PM).]

Goodknight
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9 posted 2002-07-11 04:54 PM


no greater compliment can you give any of us than the subject of this poem - real listening means someone cares - thanks Paul
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