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jwesley
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0 posted 2002-07-02 09:58 PM



Behind The Camera

You couldn't know that it was I
behind the camera, quietly loving you,
saying things you couldn't hear,
things I wish I could say and do.

You couldn't know, perched upon that rock
in silly hat, sandaled shoes, jeans and such,
that I'd remember you; remember You,
the dream I longed to live.

You couldn't see inside my heart
shadowed as it was by one you thought you knew,
you couldn't know that it was I
whispering words I longed to say to you.

You couldn't know the time you spend
within these thoughts of mine,
You couldn't know that miles away
I'd still be sharing my heart with you.

You couldn't hear my whispered words,
throbbing heart, or feel my aching soul,
but these eyes beheld a breath of love,
and Things Remembered, are what I dearly hold.

wesley james beard, jr.
© july 2002


....inspiration from 1Slick's picture, whose hat I don't really think is "silly" (you just don't tell a woman her hat is silly!) - the words just "rang" so well...hee, hee... (really, I DON'T think it's silly 1Slick) Tee-hee...

[This message has been edited by jwesley (07-02-2002 10:08 PM).]

© Copyright 2002 Wesley James Beard, Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2002-07-02 10:01 PM


Oh such a loving and tender write of heart!
I'm sure Helen will love this...
AND her hat is not silly...
I happen to love her pic too.
Good stuff here.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Greeneyes
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In Your Poetic Mind
2 posted 2002-07-03 12:41 PM


Very lovely Sir!! always good to read you...


Lauren~

Emeralds from mountains
thrust towards the sky
Never revealing their depth

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
3 posted 2002-07-03 02:31 AM


well...what can i say? i'll be back when i can say it...for a woman of many words...i am at a loss for them right now...helen
ethome
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4 posted 2002-07-03 03:52 AM


Very nicely done my friend!
Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2002-07-03 06:17 AM


J this is just beautiful.  It is good to see your words this morning, I have missed them. Hugs at ya.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}


my3monkeytoes
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In the Carolina Breeze
6 posted 2002-07-03 06:58 AM


Love from the shadows ~ something we've all done before.  Watch out, 1slick lady...you have a voyer!     

~SM

catalinamoon
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7 posted 2002-07-03 07:00 AM


Wonderful, I love the feel of this.
Sandra

Martie
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8 posted 2002-07-03 09:58 AM


It's good to see you posting, Jimmy...This came right out of the song, Secret Love, many years ago.  Well done!
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