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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-07-02 06:29 PM


Seabird take me higher
Than I've ever been before
Let's soar amongst the thermals
And descend towards the sandy shore

Take me to my lover
Who waits upon the sandy dune
In his arms I will surrender
By the light of the silvery moon

We'll cast away our inhibitions
And send them sailing out to sea
Beneath the starlit skies
Is where he'll make love to me

Two souls will join as one
The moon bearing witness to this tryst
Such a night of love and romance
I most certainly would not have missed

Suetang

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2002-07-02 08:52 PM



Someone's in love...keep it that way!

Morcastlin
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2 posted 2002-07-02 09:06 PM


Sue, this is such a beautiful and tender poem! Romance perfectly worded!

Love,
Bonnie

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3 posted 2002-07-02 09:10 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet fiend, I already miss this place so much only after 2 1/2 days of 6 on vacation! LOL! I had a little time to stop in here and check on things and just had to read this! (kiss on cheek) May you always find happiness with your love in the moonlight, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

NewEnglandlazurlu
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4 posted 2002-07-02 09:27 PM


Sue, I just love your poems that mention  the beach and the ocean. I just adore the ocean and you certainly know how to make it sooooo romantic. Waiting in the sand dunes - oh, baby!!!

Hugs, Marti

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ShadowRider
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5 posted 2002-07-02 09:40 PM



What a party!  
Do a little dance!
Make a little love
get down tonight!

an inspired writing of depth,
a joy to behold,
jeff

Suetang
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6 posted 2002-07-02 11:05 PM


Thank you all so much for your lovely words.

Take care....Sue

Suetang

mycafe
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7 posted 2002-07-03 02:16 AM


Oh Sue, you write with such great passion! Very romantic...

mycafe

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paladin
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8 posted 2002-07-03 10:14 AM


"The dunes are alive with the sound of music".

paladin

Goodknight
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9 posted 2002-07-03 10:18 AM


Passion and romance in a wonderfully well written poem - thanks - paul
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10 posted 2002-07-03 10:22 AM


Suetang
A lovely write and read.

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11 posted 2002-07-03 10:32 AM


Love, the sea and the moon. What more could we want?
Lovely.
Sandra

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