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mycafe
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0 posted 2002-07-01 09:29 PM


A Poet's Music

You sing a poem
of pulses’ rhythm
I feel your muse
strumming
sensations

Tune me in
with your keys
of joy,
sadness even

For in a trance
I would dance
to the beats
your words drum

keep it going
passion’s burning

A new music's born,
a fine poet’s
electrifying
heart song~



Keep counting your blessings

[This message has been edited by mycafe (07-01-2002 09:37 PM).]

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devina
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Cali
1 posted 2002-07-01 09:32 PM


And your heart song flows beautifully Marie!!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



Enchantress
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2 posted 2002-07-01 09:48 PM


And a beautiful song you sing Marie!
Well done!
~Hugs~

RosePetal
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3 posted 2002-07-01 10:54 PM


we all make such beautiful music together!!!
Love it

Duncan
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4 posted 2002-07-02 01:36 AM


A new music's born,
a fine poet’s
electrifying
heart song~

Very cool!


Forgetting all I'm lacking
Completely and complete
I'll take your invitation
You take all of me

Lifehouse

Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia
5 posted 2002-07-02 06:20 PM


Hello Marie

This was lovely and I'm sure many can relate.  Thank you so much for all the lovely comments you afford my writing, they are so much appreciated.

Take care....Sue

Suetang

Krissy
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6 posted 2002-07-02 06:24 PM


Marie this is a wonderful tribute to PiP’s poets beautifully presented and wonderfully well written I like it a lot well done


Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy

And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

Titia Geertman
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7 posted 2002-07-02 06:49 PM



Where songs are born
Words will enfold
Your's did
Beautifully

Thanks

Titia

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Poet deVine
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8 posted 2002-07-02 08:19 PM


Excellent! I really enjoyed your 'song'!
Mistletoe Angel
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9 posted 2002-07-02 09:13 PM




YAY!!! Awwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, you always write such beautiful harmonic songs to us all as everyone here does to me! (kiss on cheek) Thank you so much for this angelic melody, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

mycafe
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10 posted 2002-07-03 02:29 AM


Dear devina, Enchantress, RosePetal, Duncan, Sue, Krissy, Titia, Poet deVine & Noah~

Thank you all for your kind words, you sing poems of great beauty...please keep me dancing with your music.  *hugs*

marie@mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

kaile
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singapore
11 posted 2002-07-07 02:35 PM


well, i don't know...i always sing out of tune

i dig your poetry, by the way..you always have something special to share...

Mark Bohannan
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12 posted 2002-07-07 02:37 PM


Sounds to me like you are the song itself.  Wonderful words to share to the fabulous poets in this home away from home.
Madame Chipmunk
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13 posted 2002-07-07 03:28 PM


This is so so very gorgeous, Marie...
Poems are songs which are spoken...

~ singing hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

the_loner_23
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14 posted 2002-07-07 03:30 PM


Cold hands means a warm heart

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
15 posted 2002-07-07 04:11 PM


mycafe
A very nice write, enjoyed.

Sunnyone
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16 posted 2002-07-08 03:35 AM


Ah, yes........I can tell a fellow musician by their words!! And this one is beautifully put, I might add........much enjoyed!!

Open the door and let your adventure begin!!!
  
    

[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (07-08-2002 03:36 AM).]

mycafe
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since 2002-05-23
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17 posted 2002-07-08 11:21 AM


Dear lovely frens, thank you for your kind words.

faterider, really? Thanks for visiting my limited collection.  Still trying to compose more heart songs...

~mycafe

Keep counting your blessings

Gentle Spirit
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18 posted 2002-07-09 09:23 PM


Marie, this is a beautiful melody for us to listen to.  Thank you for a lovely gift.  Hugs.

Enjoy life, this is NOT a dress rehearsal.

{on the wings of words are spirits fly...and our souls are free~me}


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